Mouse Invasion
Yesterday a cheeky little brown
mouse came to visit Room 4. Everyone started to scream like this, Aar… Aar…
Aar... Aar… Aar………
I was the first to see it. I
was just standing there watching the big performance.
By Jordi
Yesterday in Room 4 a small,
grey, smart and speedy mouse somehow got into our classroom. The kids jumped
for joy.
Mrs Gatley kept saying.
“WHERE’S THE MOUSE!" It was AMAZING.
Mrs Gatley was getting angry.
Oliver
Yesterday a baby mouse snuck
into the classroom to spy on Room 4. It sneaked through the classroom and the
teacher screamed like mad. The children saw the mouse …….. Arrrrrrr… said the
children.
I went ballistic.
Angus
Yesterday Room 4 had a mouse in
our classroom. I was scared sooooooo………..
scared but I was also BRAVE!
Jacob
Yesterday a little and smart
mouse came into our classroom. It was a little baby mouse and it was brown.
Libby
Arggh…… there is a mouse
invasion in our classroom. It was a handsome, scared and cheeky mouse. I was
brave.
Amanda – Rose
Yesterday Room 4 had a little
visitor. It was a baby mouse. It was cute. Everyone screamed but I didn’t.
Jordi said Mrs Gatley was very SCARED She took her feet off the ground. She was
more scared than the children. I was brave.
The mouse ran like lightning
from behind the box to the cabinet.
Carlie
Yesterday Room 4 had a mouse.
They were scared, even Mrs Gatley. Mrs Gatley screamed, so did the children but
some did not.
Richie
Yesterday in Room 4 a cheeky
mouse visited our classroom. I was so brave.
Vincent
Yesterday in Room 4 there was a
little mouse in our classroom. I was scared of it. The other children were not
scared of it. Mrs Gatley freaked out!
Keely
Yesterday a mouse came into
Room 4. It was a cheeky mouse. It made a squeaky noises.
Caleb
Yesterday a cheeky smart mouse
was having a little look in room4 for cheese. Everyone screamed and Mrs Gatley
jumped up. The mouse ran.
It was hiding.
Brooklyn
Yesterday in Room 4 we saw a
mouse. It was brown and white. It was fun.
Where has the mouse gone?
Phoebe
Yesterday Room 4 had a mouse
visit our classroom. It was minding its own business. Mrs Gatley was scared and
she went crazy.
Karl
Yesterday a cheeky grey mouse
visited our classroom.
Jordi said, “Look there’s a MOUSE." Everybody started darting
around the teachers table where the mouse was. Mrs Gatley quickly put everybody
outside except me and a few other people. I tried to catch the mouse but I could
not get it. It kept going in different directions!
IT WAS THE BEST DAY EVER.
Lauren
Yesterday Room 4 saw a grey
mouse. Everyone was excited. Mrs Gatley made everyone go outside except me and
Lauren. It hid in a box.
It was exciting.
Amelia
Yesterday a little cheeky mouse
visited the classroom. Jordi piped up and said that there was a mouse in the
classroom. Everyone SCREAMED! I was
freaked out. Some people were brave. I wasn’t. I was scared.
Cody L
Yesterday in our classroom we
saw a little cheeky mouse minding its own business. Mrs Gatley was afraid but
we were not afraid.
Tysharna
Yesterday
a mouse visited our classroom. It went nk.. nk.. nk.. nk.. nk.. looking for cheese.
Everyone frightened it. It found an escape hole. I was interested but I was at
the back of the crowd. I wanted to have a look.
Seamus
Yesterday
a mouse came into our classroom. It was really fast. I think it was trying to
look for food. It probably got scared because there was a lot of noise because
the children were SCREAMING! Some
people were scared but I was brave.
Olivia
Yesterday
a mouse visited Room 4. It was smart and cheeky. It was cleaning itself. It was
a handsome mouse. I saw its black shadow. It was hilarious.
Xavier
Yesterday
a cheeky little brown mouse came into our classroom looking for food. The
children and the teacher screamed. Jordi spotted the mouse but I saw it first.
Josh
Yesterday
the amazing Room4 and the amazing Mrs Gatley had a mouse attack.
The
children screamed and Mrs Gatley screamed. Some of the children were brave and
some were not.
Timata
Yesterday
a bossy mouse came to our class. It came to take over our class. We tried to
catch it but it ran away.
Zach
Yesterday
there was a smart and cheeky mouse came into our classroom. Everyone was scared
except me.
Cody
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